rough cut and feedback.

feedback

barney: some shots are breaking the 180 degree rule, and break the flow of the animation.
however he found the look and art style very very good and gave it a unique twist.

sam: needs sounds with dialogue and sound effects, also the ending needs to be re-looked at and finished to get a resolved ending.

matt: the begining clearly drops in quality between transitions and in later parts of the sequence, also colour of characters change in certain clips from black to brown and back to black again.
a positive was that it was rather comical even without sound.